Wybes: My Day out at 7 Eleven

So, I pulled out my coins,

And counted them bit by bit,

I even heard someone say,

'Will someone help that creep?"

For I was buying a packet of gum,

And didn't really have much cash,

I wanted to ask my mom for some,

But I didn't want to make her mad.

Here I stand in 7 eleven,

I've started a really long line,

I began to count coins at seven,

But now it's already nine.

The people behind me are angry,

They look ready to kill,

Some little kid who had icecream,

Is now standing in a pool.

As I pulled out the last dime,

I sighed loudly in relief,

Only to realize,

That the cashier had fallen asleep.

Haven't written one like this in a while. :)
Whatdya think?

Wybes