Wednesday, January 28, 2009 I Call It Love

So I laid on my ground,
My face to the sky,
My thoughts on nothing,
But your beautiful green eyes.

I remembered the first time,
That I laid eyes on you,
You were dorky and cute,
And you never had a clue!

Your voice was perfect,
Eloquent and deep,
I thought of it often,
Before I went to sleep.

My friends think I'm obsessed,
But I say I'm in love,
Because Christopher Chase,
You were a gift from above.
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In conjunction with my story, Firsts. Chapter 4 is in the works. :)
Please read and review, thanks.
I'm sorry if this poem isn't very good.
I haven't written proper poetry in a while. Eeek.

2 comments:

Annoymous said...

I think its good, keep on writing and you'll be even better

Tiffany Khoo said...

Thanks. I'll work on it. :D